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Voted For: VALOR
OMG... WACK...
this was one sided as fuck! valor takes this shit in every way... Empire and i have beef so im sure he will bitch that this is a hate or DR but whatever cause its not... his verse just straight up sucked ass... its obveous he dosent do poetry... i mean hes tight at text but poetry just aint his thing... first of empire ya structure needs some definate work... poetic structure is much differant than battle structure... valor got right on... it effects the overall flow of the peice... valors flowed nicely and and was right on topic and was deep as fuck... empire yours was aight... not bad concidering the bad structure. ya realy need to work on that tho... no hate tho even tho you will probably misconstrue this as a hate vote... any way this one is clearly going to valor...
very good verse man..
VOTE- Valor
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