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BATTLE C.S vs THE COUNCIL

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-05-04 at 12:33 AM

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VALOR has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 02:53 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 11:21 AM.

No answer for the cancer that wrecked ya system with painfull conviction
Cant take the loss no source can provide me with ample description
Still whising for times passed where we cried and laughed memorys that i cherish
Im embarassed cuz men dont cry but my tears flow no lie im broken inside
Gave me insight to the meaning of life but i cant comprehend trust me i tried
Cuz you died.... and the loss is like air with you not there i cant breath when you not by my side
Heart heavy i wasnt ready used to cry together now my tears flow from my lonely presence
When i lost you i lost me too it seems or souls were on some level connected
Shuffle through pictures guzzling liquor trying to dull the pain but nothing will work
Its amzing how something in GODs plans could cause a man so much of a hurt
My brain cant focus it seems hopeless contemplating on following you on your path
Cuz i dont think i can take it how can i make it and nowhere to focus my wrath
Got me lost what cost is love when you lose the person you share it with?
Ive been through mental help its apparent its useless with threapists
Watch movies pause frames slow motion like ball games catch a glimpse of ya features
This all i got to visualize cuz you above me in blue skys to far away to reach ya
You was my sun my heat on earth my solatiare protection from societys cold
You dieing hit me hard thats why im still crying as im writing these words from my soul

Voted For: VALOR

I remember when i allways felt down you were always there
to let me know that some things in life just are never fair
through my ups and downs you always believed in me
then you left the planet my heart now feels shallow n empty
^^^^^^^^ OOOOOOOOO DATS DEEP MAYNE


your were my role model i looked up to you
always feelin all of your advice was the truth
and was i hope...
but your no longer here for me , i cant cope
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (GRAB AN TISSUE) NICE MAYNE DEEP FEELINGS


im feelin this deep grief ,with a sick feeling in my stomach
raw material,with raw instinct i cannot describe
my feelings are no longer there..but im trying
to keep my head up in life,but its hard to stop crying
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE MAYNE GOOD DEEPA FEELINGS


wish i can hug you for that comfort that i desire to need
its like the days that past by and your not here my heart bleeds
feeled with grief...ever since my moms told me about my lost i fail into dis belief
you were okay just the other day......
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DATS TIGHT GOOD IMAGINARY DEEP FEELINGS



*prays*

''please remain in my heart and look after me
remain friends with my sole and be that serviving seed
dont ever leave my side...
that soft loving personality you cannot hide

so loving that you are now my favorite angel
continue to teach and preach me through life from all different angles
and even if its now and forever you must rest diceased
ill pray and make sure you and your sole will forever rest in peace''


*puts his head down and cry's softly*
^^^^^^^^^^^^ (BLOW HIS NOSE) NICE MAYNE GOOD PIECE HERE MAYNE UR GOOD NICE

VALOR-DEEP FEELINGS,,,,,,,,EXPRESSION,,,,,,,,,,,PAINTIN AN GOOD PICTURE,,,,,,,,,8/10



No answer for the cancer that wrecked ya system with painfull conviction
Cant take the loss no source can provide me with ample description
Still whising for times passed where we cried and laughed memorys that i cherish
Im embarassed cuz men dont cry but my tears flow no lie im broken inside
Gave me insight to the meaning of life but i cant comprehend trust me i tried
Cuz you died.... and the loss is like air with you not there i cant breath when you not by my side
^^^^^^^^^^^GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,,EXPRESS MORE FEELINGS GET INTO DA DETAILS


Heart heavy i wasnt ready used to cry together now my tears flow from my lonely presence
When i lost you i lost me too it seems or souls were on some level connected
Shuffle through pictures guzzling liquor trying to dull the pain but nothing will work
Its amzing how something in GODs plans could cause a man so much of a hurt
My brain cant focus it seems hopeless contemplating on following you on your path
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW AGAIN NEED DEEPER EXPRESSION GET INTO DA DETAILS MORE FEELINGS


Cuz i dont think i can take it how can i make it and nowhere to focus my wrath
Got me lost what cost is love when you lose the person you share it with?
Ive been through mental help its apparent its useless with threapists
Watch movies pause frames slow motion like ball games catch a glimpse of ya features
This all i got to visualize cuz you above me in blue skys to far away to reach ya
You was my sun my heat on earth my solatiare protection from societys cold
You dieing hit me hard thats why im still crying as im writing these words from my soul
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DA LAST PART WAS GOOD DEEP MAYNE,,,,,,,,,NICE

EMPIRE-HAD GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,,,IMAGINARY,,,,,,,,FEELINGS (NEEDS MORE)

I VOTE FOR VALOR CAUSE HE HAD DEEP FEELINGS AND LOT OF EXPRESSION HE GOT INTO DA DETAILS OF HOW HE FELT~!

EMPIRE WHEN U DO ANOTHA POETRY BATTLE PUT DOWN MORE FEELINGS

NICE FLOW BUT ATTATCH DAT WITH DEEPER FEELINGS MAYNE

ACT LIKE ITS TRUE PAINT AN PICTURE~!

~PEACE~

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Voted For: Empire

Empire used a lil more vocab could
really feel ya verse like if it was me goin
through it shit was hot


VALOR
shit was koo u had better structure
verse was koo just felt Empires a lil
more but overall nice verse and good
battle

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

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DATS NOT AN GOOD EXPLAINATION U GOTS TO BREAK IT DOWN

DATS NOT HOW U BREAK IT DOWN

~PEACE~ JUST NOTIFYING

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

even more explaination just incase
Empires was a lil more descriptive 2
me i could really imagine his verse
Valors ending and structure was koo
but Empires overall verse was better

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uppin number 2 in this shit
comeon u herb ass sleepers

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nuff sed valor gots this.....both did gud..........

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