Voted For: VALOR

valor-Your verse was overall better as i see it.... you had the better imagery and emotion.... your structure was good and your story was solid... and seeings how i am a topical god i do know what 9im talking about... your flow was on and i liked how half of your verse was freeverse only thing i can say about your verse is from now on when you do a poetry battle keep your verse freeverse it is much better to the poetry and topical heads out there... well atleast over on Original


Empire- your verse was alright the structure was stretched and was hard to follow... it was more like a story then a poem....your flow was okay but you was forcing your ending words to make them rhyme... like i said to valor KEEP YOUR VERESE FREEVERSE

v/valor

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