This is iLL, well built up storyline and imagery, everything to me stayed on point... Cant really criticize anything, the actual story line was madd detailed and well thought, the concept was tidy and worked well throughout... The rhythm was on point, multies and some internal rhymes complementing your rhyme scheme, and it seemed flawless in places, seems a good piece to do audio... The wordplay and vocab combined well together, madd similes and metaphors and imagery kept a vivid picture in my head... iLL aint another word for it, deep, interesting and well related to todays society... keep em coming, and keep dropping them gems...

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