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Old 10-10-04, 02:58 PM   #28
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Voted For: Word-Scape

Word-scape won this battle

SCape: your structures were both ok, nothin great......... i was gonna vote against u juss cuz u had to be the 20th person with a toothless line but after i saw wreck's finishers u were the winner.......... u had sum played lines but overalll i could say it was decent

Wreck: u sucked............ structure was kinda off, and ur two finishers was sum of the wackest shit ive heard............ u had that line about "word escapes" to get a personal in but besides that ur thing was only semi decent....... and ur overall verse didnt flow together, only individual bars seemed to go together, u needa work on that

besides that it was not a really good battle, but no hate, juss try and get better at wat yall do........ v/word
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