LOL..I Wasn't Sleeping..
Im Just Lazy..
Well Dayum, What A Vivid Story..
Flow Was Immaculate Through Tha Whole Piece..
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Shes ten years old, and ten years cold, so much that her breath's seen in the air..//
a routine scare from neglecting parents, so when she screams theres no one there..//
Cuz no one cares..and no one dares to calm her shivers when she shakes..//
quivers and quakes..after hearing each day of her life was all mistakes..//
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Daaaayum..
Word About Tha Similes And Metaphors Used..Dope Dope..
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but he was always shady, never treated her like a lady..//
his liquor came first, even when placed in the lineup of her and their baby..//
She's sorry he got her pregnant, on that night of drunken passion..//
she's sorry the chips of her fertility were to much for him to cash-in..//
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Daaayum Again..
Loads More Quotables, But I Don't Wanna Take Up A Whole Page Quoting..
Pure Brilliance For What It Was..
Keep It Coming Like Always..
Phantom