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atlas the vagabond
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IP:
Voted For: schema
props to both battlist, but here's the verdict.
flow:schema
vocab:xclusive
punches:schema
seriousness:schema
hunger:schema
verdict: Xclusive, i wouldn't necessarily say you had less hunger, but there was something called effort that i think schema put forth more of in his verse. But in terms of hunger i think you both were fairly close. But unfortunately, you lacked the skill on this one.
Bandage does not rhyme with sausage.
This fact also led me to believe that you weren't that hungry for it. Because just saying the line, out loud you and i both know that the two words don't rhyme. But i commend you on your try. As every person does, no matter how ill you are, you need elevation. Just a lot right now, keep at it.
schema-had superior flow, very much enjoyed reading this one. Unfortunately i heard schema was dead, is this true? but what got this one is superior flow, and the constant punches. the closer was great as well, winning you this battle.
wanna prove yourself against a vet? go punch an animal doctor..
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