Voted For: Notorious Verses

structure:notorious
flow:notorious
vocab:notorious
punches:notorious
hunger:tie
verdict:the structure of rabbits was very bad, because i didn't understand it at all at first, which is very bad. I got it after close inspection, but it shouldn't take close inspection for me to get it, this was your downfall. Elevate, because i see potential

notorious-good flow, nice use of multi's, generally it wouldn't take much to win against him in this one, and this is no hate to you rabbit, but you came raw on this one, i really like it. But a problem was that you had great flow, just not great punches to match the flow. Put the two together, and your verses will be that much better.

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