I could tell some thought and time went into this so for effort I give=5/5
flow was aight could've been better,
maybe sound better on audio so for that I give= 2/5
vocabulary was dry so I give vocab.=2/5
And overall consept was aight but I think bush is tight so I give consept and opinions=3/5

you shoulda put it in a more general perspective, I understand u gotta be sincere on some stuff but jus didnt feel right. Um, I do respect the topic tho so for good choice of topic I give=4/5
KEEEPPPPP ELEVATIN and maybe u'll get openmic of November, jus aint crackin right now

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