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10-16-04, 11:33 AM
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"Pushed" ft. L.I.
IP: 0825 899A
NOTE: Italiscised Text Is Speach From Abstrakt...
Regular Text Is The Speach Given From L.I... Pushed... An Abstrakt Production ft. L.I.
[[Intro]] Times Are Just So Crazy Now... We've Got Terrorism And Wars Breaking Our American Families Apart... I Give Alot Of Respect To Our Leaders For Getting Us Threw Times Like 9/11 And Such... But At The Same Time So Much Of Our American Political System Is So Unjust... It’s Time To Bring Some Of There Faults To The For-front... [[Verse One: Abstrakt]] Backed To Nooks As Shook Be The Lands I Stood Up Like Master Crooks... Look Threw The Bush Books And Ask, "Could These Times Disasters Push?"... "Would Bush Protect?" Or Look Threw Colorin Books As Nights Hold Deaths... Dont Hold Your Breath, Lets Connect The Dots An Spot How He's Folded Chests... Holden Heads In His Palms Without Knowing His Policies Invest In Qualms... Injesting Faults As Our Trades Explode Manopolies Against Buisness Arms... We Pin This Guard Of Nation To Blame In Hard Times When Its His Fault In Large... Enlarge The Picture List And Spar Your Complaints You See Why I Aint Stalling Bars... It's Time To Voice The Opinions That Have Been With-held For Far To Long... America's Youth On My Side Baby... L.I., STAND THE FUCK UP AND BE THE AMERICAN VOICE!!! And now Bush.. Here comes the spit that will guarantee that yah ass is out the White house next year... [[Verse Two: L.I.]] Politically inept but still tries to intercept votes from Kerry… Bush we all you suck at runnin shit.. Experience? Yeah barely… Said you know bout nuclear weapons.. all we hear is mutterin… & if you were telling us the truth.. then why you keep stutterin?... No need to hide your lie's.. it's obvious you cant run shit… Why we over in Iraq?.. none of your excuses legit… Your not meant for the job.. quote that cause it's true… & with the end of this spit there goes another vote for you… [[Chorus]] Banners And Stands Of Venders... Flags Sold By The Billions In Stores... Lend Your, Hand Support Guns And Kills Done... I Say End War, Break Way For Brilliance... We The, Land Of Free And Pushed Doors... I Say We Lend To Bush; Your Pushed More... [[Verse Three: Abstrakt]] Political Force In Minimal Peace Given All A Hipocritical Scene... Little Dolls To Weep With Their Children In Middles Of Beef... While Middle America Sleeps To Screams Of Little Bo Peep... Talks Riddled Of Terror As Youth Bleeds In All This Pro-Free... Broke Dreams And Calous Demand Reign Over Our Chalis... While Bush Schemes Let Ignorance Stain Covers Of Malice... We Bound With Wrists Stripped Of Freedoms Free Grounds... Enemy Alows No Wish Given As Americas Nees Sit Street Bound... Thats Right, Word Of The People Baby!!!... [[Chorus]] Banners And Stands Of Venders... Flags Sold By The Billions In Stores... Lend Your, Hand Support Guns And Kills Done... I Say End War, Break Way For Brilliance... We The, Land Of Free And Pushed Doors... I Say We Lend To Bush; Your Pushed More... L.I. And Abstrakt Baby... Bringing That Clarity To Ya Blind Spots... Get Your Heads Out Ya Asses And See Whats Up America.... Eyes Wide To The World And Thats What Up, We Out Baby... .One. Last edited by Abstrakt : 10-16-04 at 11:36 AM. |
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10-16-04, 01:49 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: 08CF 169D
Uppin this...dunt sleep
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10-16-04, 02:08 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
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The ONLY ^^^ lines that showed any sort of insight and good flow. The rest was crap. Bad flow and obvious lyrics, overuse of vocab that you didnt know what it meant, vocab that wasnt spelled correctly. What I suggest is this: stop trying to make OM of the month and just make it. You're just too focused on trying to be the best and not enough focus on making your lyrics the best. Get what im sayin?.........4/10 Pz.
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10-16-04, 02:40 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: 08CF 169D
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i thought you left?
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10-16-04, 02:47 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
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I was asked to leave feedback, so I did. Otherwise, yes im gone for now. I think. 
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10-16-04, 02:55 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: 08CF 169D
Okay...and for the record...i know the vocabulary i use
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10-16-04, 03:39 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
How Do I Constantly Focus On Getting OM Of The Month???...
I Drop A Piece And After Throw The Poll Up For Shits And Giggles... I Dont Care If I Win Or Not... Its Just An Added Bonus If I Take It... These Two Pieces I Recently Did Are Spur Of The Moment Deals... Not Long Dragged Out Procceses That Are Aimed To Win... That Poll Is Just Put Up There Cuz There's No Reason Not To Ask... And I Havent Seen ANY Of Your Ish Yet... For Such A Hard Judge Of Talent Your Material Must Be Imaculent... .One. |
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10-16-04, 06:45 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
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Guess what? It is. 
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10-16-04, 06:52 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: ED17 9600
Shit.. this is dope... worthy.. but how bout mines....
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10-16-04, 09:01 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanks For The Look...
Lololmao, Poor Para... He's In Shock... He Got Used To Getting Upwards Of 80 Replies From His Free Agents Thread... When He Come Here And Drops And Doesnt Do The Same Numbers... Weeeeeeeeell, Its Just To Much For The System To Handle... Lololmao... No Worries Fam, I'll Go Drop Some Love... .One. |
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10-16-04, 09:10 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
Sorry Mayne You Good But Not That Good 4 Open Mic of October
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10-17-04, 12:23 AM
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Miss Me?
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IP: 08CF 169D
Hand down your the best King Dipshit...
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10-17-04, 12:39 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: A621 A1C1
his shit is hella dope...congrats LI and Abstrakt....
Definition represents all gangsta shit worldwide!!! |
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10-17-04, 12:49 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
this is alright.....the emotion and flow is there..........creativity is needed more to make it more interesting......u could of used multies to make ur piece even better.....just keep droppin and things will come....not good enough for open mic of oct. cuz my piece is in the picture...LOL................
anyway return feed under my freeflow "leGenD is BorN"<< open mic of oct 100% |
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