hmmm,not bad i feel ya style but not ya structure .....
its hard to follow at times.....but i don't consider you a noob..lol
add multi's n tone the explanations down a bit..i bet half the
peeps that read this don't even understand it...nice drop....
but ya style still needs work in my eyes dawg...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!