I found that hard to follow and it lacked structure. Pretty weak i'm gonna have to give it 2 stars but who knows maybe it will sound dope in audio. Keep it coming No man is born without potential! I think you will only get better just try to write about something personal to you or something people can relate to but keep it in good taste. Actually I read it over & I guess i'll give you a 3 star for it's creativity that was actually aiight. Just it's hard to rate because I might sing it to a different tune than you. Remember your toughest critic is you so if you dig it than it's all good baby baby!! Even if you is a fat phony! jk Jay Z & Biggie smalls nigga shit yo drawls