hahaha hard to rate since I didn't read the whole thing but some of it was aiight . Not many rappers use conversations in their raps but you made it work. I'd say you would be good in topic battling, And you reminded me not every line has to be the bomb cuz in a song you have to set up & build suspence 4 you drop the bomb. Good delivery if you can rap that on audio that would be ill; I give you 4 stars **** also do you have any audio