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Old 10-21-04, 10:05 PM   #15
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Voted For: Lyric

ok lyric ill give it to u man but i gotta couple complaints for both of yall.......... first off lyric ur name is alot more played then his......... and the "shitty ass rhymes" line was the worst and biggest filler bar i have ever seen on this site......... it almost lost u the battle.... but u came with sum decent punches and shit, and ur wording and vocab was better..... u also had imagery and shit which is good.....

Lil u had 4 lines relatin to that smoka thingt........ u shoulda juss used that "wolf cryin one" cuz that shit was pretty dope....... almost won u the battle

puff daddy line kinda lost it for u and so did the way u worded the setup to the last line........ doesnt really go together well......... and u had pretty bad vocab....... aight decent battle, but this goes to lyric
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