okay ice pick got this battle to me you both had real nice drops
pick- work on evenin out your lines a lil but you had sone siiick punches i liked it you had tight flow nice it was an easy read which i like and i felt it all the way man tight nice opener and closer too keep it up...

scriptive-aight one structure work on that man cuz itd be an easier read if you put your lines out instead of one after another...you had sick multi's i liked them punches were nice flowed okay but wasnt feeling it as much but nice drop this was a close battle

best lines
pick-I make the skies glisten/so what if I trash fags?
wrap you in an American flag in Bagdad

you've killed as my rappers as untouched old rifles
You grasping rap will happen when a Muslim holds Bibles
I'm more crooked than the crack in J-Lo's ass
there's more chance of me losing if you dont say no raps
fuck it I might go soft
so you won't piss and have to take your diapers off

scriptive-I ~choke this cretin~, me sayin you're a ~joke is needless~/ Get your "penis fondled by Einstein" if you want a ~stroke of genius~//
^^was an okay pucnh but kinda played out nice tho

~Beware bitch~, I ~bear switch~ blades, so say your ~prayers quick~/ If greatest fears give an erection... then I got you ~scared stiff~//

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