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Old 10-23-04, 07:53 PM   #28
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kinda weak battle. both need to come harder than that.

frein master - damn. how do you manage to type your verse like that? i was confused about where lines started and ended. i really didnt wanna read it after the first line. but you had some ok stuff. your opener was weak. and so were the 2nd and 3rd barz. the only decent punch you had was the closer. you had no personals in ur verse. u mentioned his name once but u coulda switched it with someone elses name too and used the same verse. ur flow was off becasue your structure wasnt really good. overall 4/10


a.k.a - coulda came a lot harder than that. i seen a lot of your other battles and this wasnt really up to par. your flow was good and your verse was easy to read cause all the lines were basically even. your opener i wasnt really feelin it. maybe it coulda been re-worded. but it was a weak punch. you tried some personals that didnt really hit but they were there. your closer was kinda good. overall - 5/10


a.k.a wins because he had a better flow, his strucuture was ok and even though he had weak punches they were there and he tried some personals..........