well an easy one to judge here...
vivids verse was too short to get enough imagery or depth into this battle.
what vivid put was actually quite good,but you blew it by not getting enough into it,flow,struc and vocab was pretty good...
oops i aint got 20 posts....so ill holla back shortly,
meanwhile can u both reurn tha fav...much appreciated
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156905
however panda had more depth and imagery,and his vocab and complexity were jus on a higher level..
not bad for a quik drop at all.