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Voted For: Theosophic~Truth
ha ha ha. funny stuff mam
cataclyz - u had an ok verse overall. your opener was whack. and so was the 2nd bar. u came harder at the end startin with the paul pierce line. u had a good flow and all ur lines were even. ur closer wasnt very good. overall - 5/10
Truth - nice verse from you. you had some nice wordplay and some good punches. i woulda liked to see some personals frm you. i liked the homeless shelter line from you and ur opener. u had a good openeer. ur closer was weak though. overall - 6.5/10
truth won this he had better punches than the other dude. both of u need to be more creative with ur punches though
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