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Old 10-25-04, 12:38 PM   #12
Re~Verb
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everything to conclusion here.......
structure (just).a lil stretched,the content and depth was definately more in conclusions peace....you have good vocab which adds to the depth, and your imagery is better.

dopeman.
well you said u didnt want to battle me in topical coz u felt u was too good......well....your verse was very newbish....the structure was well off, vocab was too basic.
content/imagery was ok, nothing special...
you need to elevate a lot...from a guy with as many battles as u have,id expect more.
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