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Voted For: Nostradamus
Oh shit... i vote this for the battle of the month this is a very dope battle very nice too...... very good... now on to the voting........
Atticus: very dope verse... nice lines and nice overall.... you had very dope imagery and i felt you was on the topic the whole way except for some parts..... you flowed iight but it wasnt as good...... some parts of your flow came seriously messed.....i give you props on your vocab... very good and impressive.... your stucutre wasnt that good..... the subtitles of each scene was very good and it matched with easch verse.....and it really got me into reading it....i had to read it about 4 times before feedbacking on this.....also i like how you did the flashback which gave it a little bit more excitment but you do that in some of your open mics.....yours i gotta say was the most creative out of the battle and also the most original.... i read some it again and i fugured that some parts didn't have a very great rhyme sceme......but i liked how you posted good vocab as the rhymeing.....nice topic and nice overall....
Nostradamus: your shit was very dope nice one and you stayed very well on the topic.... firsdt... you had way better flow than atticus..... it was very good and it flowed trhought the whole verse..... you had also very nice structre which was very good... nice...you had very nice vocab... very good and some words i didnt even know.. it really was suprising.. but both of you were a tie on vocab..... on more creativity.... i'd say abstrakt had a better and creative verse.... especially the verse subtitles it was good..... nost had ok subtitles for each verse....i'd say the better impact in the end was Nost... his was staying on the topic and had a better end in my opinion........you had a very great rhymye sheme it was very good and it rhymed through out well..... but atticus had a bettter well though out beginning .. i didnt like nostradamuis beginging that much... only at the end it seemed to get better...
Final Vote is :Nostradamous but this topical battle was very close and was definatly one of the most dope battles i've ever seen... shud be recorded....
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