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Old 10-26-04, 01:00 AM   #4
Ikynovel
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Voted For: Nostradamus

Damn you niggas and your fucking 50 line max shit....

you need to break it down to like 30 or 40 lines so that people will actually vote instead of gettin tired of reading half way and just be like oh well i like this guy more so ima vote him


Nos-Your veres was good... imagery was there and your emotion was strong.... only thing that i didnt really care for was your shit being centered and the fact that you didnt do it free verse i like topicals alot better when they are free verse.,... other then that no complaints vocab and flow was good


abstract-your ish was okay aswell but i didnt really feel the emotion as much as i was with Nos's verse but the the rest was about even so that is why im giving Nos the win beucase i felt his emotion better

v/Nos

return favor with my Topical battle aginast conclusion on FL