CHRYMESINDICATE
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Voted For: Theosophic~Truth
yo dis nigga must b crazy sniffin lines wit wiskey/
Theosophic is as real as Fredro Star on dance 360
^^^^weak intro, wit wiskey??? random
Another victory under my belt but ur rhymes are still trash/
Have another nigga spit for you n pay em in RV cash
^^^^^na it was weak, there is no real thought to that just putting some rhyming words together, intro and ending were weak, this were you need you best punches to catch readers minds. flow was alriht, bit crooked, structure was off
verse gets 3/10
Cat thinks he's cool, rockin jada, he's loving his pic
tried to grasp a higher level, and I felt a tug on my dick
^^^^well content i didnt really like but it is a nice punch anyway so it was an ok intro
he says hes right on my ass, and its really makin me sick
so I lean to the left, pull down my pants, and take a shit
^^^LOLOLOLOLOL, but its pathetics but LOLOLOLOLOLOL, hahaha funneist line of the battle but it is a very weak punch but i still like it, flow was really nice, all the bars are very even and structure was pretty good
verse gets 8/10
yo good battle here, return the favour ok
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