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Old 10-28-04, 12:00 AM   #8
Ikynovel
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This was a truely great piece...

Kaotic Theory-your piece was great... the flow was good your stucture was on... your emotion was superb and i really enjoyed your imagery

Fluid-your part was good aswell... had good rhyme scheem but my only adive is to keep your verse free verse...


yo valor try and find our collab that we did ova on RB and we will bring it ova here.... ima bout to drop my piece that was nominated for Legends on RB

look out for it its Litmus Test
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