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A Reflection Of The Past
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Rough Times-- by: Kaotic.Theory and fluidmoon
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Rough Times
-fluidmoon- Life is tough these days, so many hard choices to make,
Wars and crime, grimey shit going on,too much to take, Can't handle the force fed fear through images on t.v., Thats all we see, trusting no one, including ourselves, Because the anger spreads, appearing closer is the ledge, Such an easy way out, but it happens constantly, can't deal, People need to feel safe, but what is it? when its no where near, The road is a long one, and there is hurt and death awaiting you, Around every corner there is a dealer, murder, voices calling you, To cross over, pressure is strong from peers in the threshold, Of confused hearts and minds, lying faces twist in the cold, Be bold,for life gets easier with age they tell us,yea,how so?, We grow,wear the signs of our burdens like masks,when we get old, Our war paints deep, and time continues to tick, the clock will tell, The story of our lives,of who will go to heaven or to the depths of hell, Life is rough, deal with it, because who knows what is next for us, Live this day like it is your last,be strong,cus life will continue to get rough... -Kaotic.Theory- The streets i grew up in could be rough on days homocides, other crimes kept kids from being able to play people crying,people lieing,even people dieing for actually having commen sense for life , trying to survive,takeing care of there family trying to be something that others say they can't be it's sad when you have to walk to school every day seeing bodies in the bushes at times decay'ed its ruthless,trying to keep your head up and survive actually careing about what happens or goes on in your life which others dont care,because they never had a parent growing up in group homes,not having them there when your sick or throwing up its rough,but what can you do,its the life that some people choose but pray everyday that its not your life or your family that you loose but you have to live with it,and learn to move on its crazy,your whole life and friends can change in a second just the other day i seen my homegirl who was pregnant and doing drugs,with no remorce on her baby acting like other scared parents,being shady i try not to let it faze me.... i sometimes think back to when i was just a few years older then a baby innocent not knowing the problems that surround me thanking god i was never abandoned,which some weird lady found me its sounds mean,but its the truth..... ...man only if people knew the trouble with the youth
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wow a collaboration...in poetry...good idea... I liked this very much...Kaotic good emotion BOI... and fluid you always d real good on these drops... Props to both...peep mine I'm bout to drop in like 5 minutes... peace
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WOW I was thoruoghly impressed by this.....FLUID your imagery an way of indirectly describing your thoughts is amazing...you make the reader think an thats what peotry is about...wow I am just amazed by your talent...kaotic...yours was tight as well your imagery was nice....an your way of wording gives your verse more power nice shit....both of you were spectacular..wow great job y'all
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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thank you so much for the feedback,,i'm trying to see if this collab in poetry idea will fly,,if it does,i will be adding a forum for it in here,and peeps can collab on ideas and there words can flow together,and i appreciate the feed man...1
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Am Speechless.
THis ama nominate the best poem this month until i see someone who can top this am serious.
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thanx for all the love
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Thank you all for the feed, i very much appreciate it....1
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This was a truely great piece...
Kaotic Theory-your piece was great... the flow was good your stucture was on... your emotion was superb and i really enjoyed your imagery Fluid-your part was good aswell... had good rhyme scheem but my only adive is to keep your verse free verse... yo valor try and find our collab that we did ova on RB and we will bring it ova here.... ima bout to drop my piece that was nominated for Legends on RB look out for it its Litmus Test |
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word thanks man
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U~P~P~I~N....for some more feed...and love for the ones who gave some...lol
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uppin......
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yea, wheres the love people? i will shut this forum down...nah i'm playin..lol,uppin for the feeding...i'm hungry
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this is rediculous....
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Its Da Real Deal
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this was deep i like it nice collab everything in it was true it was really deep and made me think alot keep droppin da both of you
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capitol D-A-M-N......lol thats all i have to say nice collab like dv sed the best poetry i seen in a long time stay up
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