Voted For: Verbal Phenom



Good battle.........

MOst...firsty thing I noticed was how stretched your verse was..and your flow was somewhat off threw out.....definitely takes away from your verses power...some of your punches were decet but you over did it with similes...u gotta mix ya punches up....some of them were played like whellchair line...dats really played...I didn't really see any personals..I saw attempts at the but not quite..if u had personalized more an tightened up ya structure u coulda got it


Verbal..........your flow was way better and your strucutre was tight definitely helped u edge this...and your verse was full of persoanls....they just kept coming...it took away from your complexity somewhat but your lines were hitting...hard persoanls usually gets you a victory an it did here....your vocab was basic thought os that was a negative but u redeemed yourself with some wordplay....not bad

VOte: verbal

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