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Old 10-31-04, 03:30 AM   #39
Parallel
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that was hella weak dawg...get soem punches in your verse dawg ok ill admit there was some attemts n shit but bad stucture and well it flowed thats good but bad stucture...you gotta admit youve also seen better form yourself...cuz ive seen better from you back in the day or thats jsut cuz i have elevated so damn much...4/10

Frien-Master:
k that was pretty tight punches hard hitting dope punches thats for sure...some wordplay attemts not bad but dayum bad stucture but still flowed...read some of the vets verses you'll see how stucture goes...iight...you get this tho...6.3/10

retrun favour here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157938
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