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Old 10-31-04, 04:09 PM   #26
Kawn Flixx
FUCK STROBE
 
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Voted For: ...Xclusive...

here's the breakdown...

Oreo

yo man..your rhyme scheme was really basic..
though I see youre elevated..it wasn't enough
for Xclusive..like it was like a freestyle..with
writer's bock man..I aint hatin cuz we coo..
elevate some more

Xclusive

your punches were pretty good
and the closer was funny..made me laugh..
and I never laugh...EVER..flow was good
and structure was about between iight and good..
so you win for an overall better verse
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