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Old 11-04-04, 08:54 PM   #14
TeamOne
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Voted For: ThugLife

Who do you “think” you are 2pac yelling out ThugLife…
I “guess” you think you’re gonna stab me with a knife…
3 days for that shit????!!!!! 2/10
Naw, you couldn’t hurt a “fat” man and his stick of sausage…
After…...I beat your “thin” ass you gonna need a bandage…
................. dont even rhyme right..... damn fuckin shame 2/10
You wish you were dope enough to “drop” it like its hot…
Like the song by Snoop ft. Pharrell You’ll “fall” on the spot…
........... wtf???? weak closer 1/10


bitch I take 3 min to load my gat/
and a couple more to make a track/
..... ok shit....... but shit takes u awhile,,,,,, 3/10

your like 10 u aint even got hair round yo nut sack/
gets its own ratin......... 5/10, it was ok

ok....... well u already won the battle with that....... so there ya go........ ur structure was ok....... his was better, but then again u rhymed more of ur lines
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