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Old 11-05-04, 07:44 PM   #3
I. Mind
G.Y.T.
 
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From: 6-5-0
IP:

a battle against you im just not feeling it/
what kinda gay name is Logistic/

That barely rhymes

come on dog now think/
what kinda of man puts his profile in pink/

Dat ain't a good punch

so now i cant tell if your a boy or a girl/
your mother told me you were both which made me hurl/

Very sad punch

this battle im taking it/
the only way you will win is if i get disqaulified for some shit/

Umm, still not good punch

looking at your record of wins i see you only have one/
nigga turning paler than Michael Jackson/

Look at your own record..

basiclly..think of better punches, vocab, n structure...

-Dabatos
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