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Old 11-06-04, 08:29 PM   #27
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

Trauma...heh..yo shit wasn't good
from my point of view...yo punches weren't hard
and tha structure was too stretched mayn...
advice tho: elevate more

V.P. mayn yo drop was good...yo punches were
pretty hard & landed...nice vocab up in hea..,
tha flow was pretty decent too..and nice lil
bit of wordplay there...

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