Voted For: frein-ma$ter
first off frein had 8 lines.......so i dunno if he d/q`d but n e way.
frein wins because his punches had more metas...a more creative verse.
frein you lacked jus about everything else,struc,flow..a lot of ya rhymin was off, punches were weak..try makin em personal,but u had a more creative and harder hittin verse.
fire. sorry but hella wack.gud struc...no punches metas no nothin..jus a bunch of statements that made no sense, only thing u managed to achieve woz it rhymed.
both return an honest one.
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