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Old 11-08-04, 08:16 PM   #60
I. Mind
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Originally Posted by Introspect

yup i'm bak to droppin battles an open mics again....


i ecko tha pain from tha sting like hollow wasp's...
damage an carnage surpass my lyrics like hitlers houlacosts...
explicit lyric stickers submerge's tha art that is purposley hidden...
personals are twisted like aim convo's featuring latin kitten...
kids parish in peices cause they lacked self intelligence...
lyrics today disgustin like eatin feices check tha verse tha punches are irelevent
let me retract your thoughts an appear unknowingly like cancerous spots...
feed your brain learn the anadamoy of decompesition cause bodies rot..
serve large portions of vocab through bar by bar injections...
your comebacks recieve numerous rejections..missin rhymes like c sections..

This was pretty hot man, the vocab was hott, the structure was okay, the flow was okay.. but just was too complex for me lol.. (Sorry, I aint good wit words )8/10
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