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Old 11-10-04, 08:00 PM   #10
Meziaa.
New to RV
 
Posts: 64
From: Bean town.
IP:

Not feeling it...

Your flow was too boring, and ya lyrics were ehhh...
Delivery was kinda boring also...
I can't understand how this is a battle or 'diss' but you going on about how he is your boy and what not....

I'm not trying to disrespect you at all, basically constructive criticism...

The ending was aight though. Kinda surprising, didn't know it was coming... You have potential though...
Elevate....
I say work on ya emotion and flow and quality...
I know my quality is ass but it doesn't sound like i'm spitting in a empty room neither.....
But keep doing you, Hard work equals Success.
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