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11-07-04, 03:47 PM
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Deadly Vision Battle + Shout to RV's Fakest
IP: CD17 5E25
peep this track
www.soundclick.com/saaran its the dv one ya'll listen till the end to see who i'm shoutin out to haha
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11-07-04, 03:52 PM
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Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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IP: FEFC E273
haha.....lmao.....shoutin out to carsonjet at the end
overall this was aight......flow was aight....mic presence was aight.....delivery could be worked on, lyrics was decent....i was not excpect the ending lol |
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11-07-04, 05:38 PM
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Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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IP: FEFC E273
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11-07-04, 07:58 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 2C89 E12A
We can all see what your doin.
Shout out to CarsonJet. That way people notice you. Jump on the I sound like a robot trend after constantly IM'ing me with... "hey jet peep this, tell me what u think" and "what should I do to make this better" Don't get ahead of yourself. And don't contradict yourself. |
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11-08-04, 10:40 AM
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IP: 82D1 1D46
i did that about three months ago when i dropped my first audio yo jet fuck it lets squash all beef for serious its gettin stupid
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11-08-04, 10:56 AM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 0DEF 74BB
Consider it squashed.
Dont know why you jumped down my throat to begin with. Been an angry lil rapper this whole week.  |
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11-08-04, 11:02 AM
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IP: 82D1 1D46
yeah agreed with that shit...
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11-10-04, 12:19 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Nice diss fam.
Keep droppin
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11-10-04, 07:49 PM
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IP: 183F 8D72
pretty decent... flow was good, your lyrics were pretty good too..
everybody tryna get at Carson.. dayum.. Nice diss tho.. good job saaran.. pz..
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11-10-04, 08:00 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 947A 2011
Not feeling it...
Your flow was too boring, and ya lyrics were ehhh... Delivery was kinda boring also... I can't understand how this is a battle or 'diss' but you going on about how he is your boy and what not.... I'm not trying to disrespect you at all, basically constructive criticism... The ending was aight though. Kinda surprising, didn't know it was coming... You have potential though... Elevate.... I say work on ya emotion and flow and quality... I know my quality is ass but it doesn't sound like i'm spitting in a empty room neither..... But keep doing you, Hard work equals Success. |
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