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Old 11-13-04, 10:16 AM   #18
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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€- - iight verse, you had a good flow and some good punches.

Best Line - Two Bit, Wanna learn a little bit?. You aint worth cow shit, Got it?
When you Actually bother to post your verse, Dont bother Revising Shit,

Worst Line - 5-20 lines?, Hmm.. "Two" Is more your style, It aint worth a While,
My first Word could Beat your WHole entire verse by 200 miles,

Two_Bit - you had an OK verse - you need to work on some punches and a vocab.

Best Line - yo names god's angel but ya say you from hell?
that dont make no sense, do ya know how to spell?

Worst Line - dawg what you gotta do is pray i dont spray
ya house with my m4 while i light a J.
when ya want sex you gotta pay
i could rhyme about you all fuckin day
you that big a fag, you bout to be in a bag

OVERALL - this battle was a little whack, but my vote is for â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-. Better verse better flow.. better everything! Two you need to work on your lines throw some stronger punches.

Vote - â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

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