lmfao....... but just so that shit doesnt get taken offf ill explain it now...... memorize had a good structure although some of the rhyming words didnt go along as well.... u had some punches and the pac lines are good, altho ur whole verse was about that...... (dont blame u tho...... dude is obsessed)

now thuglife, or w/e u like to call urself now....... i think u wrote that in about 25 seconds........ alil flow, but besides that there was nothin..... no substance, and the lines were too short and everythin..... u needa up ur game some..... up it alot.... no punches or personals..... but w.e, v/memorize as stated above

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