make us know wot ya talkin bout man, give it a title or summin. also you need more multies, alot more multies otherwise it just sounds like a basic flow. like most of ya bars were just rhyming at the end for instants...i walk into the fire and you pussys know i aint gunna retire...see man its flows but its really basic. Try new things out. heres n example of good multies...i stay calm ready ta bust..standing steady n robust..ma style never rust as it ready ta leave you heavily concussed. anyway man it was a pretty good drop man keep it up, peace
See da multies flow man?