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Better than you..
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^blackwell would know by the look of things. i thought this would be about smoking weed tho. work on ya vocab and think more about ya rhymes. put more feelin and emotion into it. try to plan ya rhyme scheme a bit better and structure ya verse into paragraphs n even a chorus.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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