this is not my style whatso ever.... but lyrically this drop wasn't bad.... multis ... flow was very nice... suprised me... but it was choppy at times.... work on expanding your rhymes a little bit more and switching it up.... add more variety to your scriptz.... there is one main problem i saw in your piece.... very weak ending.... i dunno how you say it but

"im right here midwest bangin da true shit/
get yo head on right im so fluid i rap when i spit/"

to me that dosen't rhyme.... try rhymin off "true shit" with somethin like "ruthless" instead of "when i spit" it killed it at the end dawg.... overall the flow was on point... multis were there.... but i do see room for elevating.... nice drop though... nothin to be ashamed of.... peaz.... [1]