now im a midwest game spitter lo profile a dame getter/
no need fa names ma u know da slang a pain killer/
like a brain chiller minus below yo chain rocks/
i aint da same average everyday rapper i slang rocks/
when i bang blocks shatter yo face i slang glocks/
hang out on da corner when hot i stay in shop/
like i stay and pop fuck about a cop i spray and hop/
play and cop use a fifth when i dip i lay in drops/
i may as well crop dig up a ditch and lay ya flopped/
hate a top notch wannabee bitch dat skate on chops/
im so fatal watch fifty a tragedy he so stirred/
im so blurred vision is cloudy from blunts burned/
im absurd gimme a condom im on herr/
she got me like a pipe in a brick im rock harrd/
i bust squirt look at her face its so smerred/
ha ha ha fifty a fool he on furr/(fire)
dat boy wild look da whip its on spurrs/
rollin deep in da cut wit a blunt he dont curr/(care)
dats right i dont care stare at me long i might blare/
bust a clip in yo lip yo teeth chip u cant clear/
im right here midwest bangin da true shit/
get yo head on right im so fluid i rap when i spit/

if u dont like it then u just dont know so fuck what u thought im back and up to my old tricks again masked up and ready yung fifty nigga aka tragedy holla back at ya boy............

hmmmmmmmmm...not really my style. But I was feeling most of the multis and shit. Other than the topics style i was feeling it. Good drop
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yeah...Dope Drop..

like i stay and pop fuck about a cop i spray and hop/
play and cop use a fifth when i dip i lay in drops/


^my favorite line^

keep it up
check out my Drop..

Peace

this is not my style whatso ever.... but lyrically this drop wasn't bad.... multis ... flow was very nice... suprised me... but it was choppy at times.... work on expanding your rhymes a little bit more and switching it up.... add more variety to your scriptz.... there is one main problem i saw in your piece.... very weak ending.... i dunno how you say it but

"im right here midwest bangin da true shit/
get yo head on right im so fluid i rap when i spit/"

to me that dosen't rhyme.... try rhymin off "true shit" with somethin like "ruthless" instead of "when i spit" it killed it at the end dawg.... overall the flow was on point... multis were there.... but i do see room for elevating.... nice drop though... nothin to be ashamed of.... peaz.... [1]