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Old 11-18-04, 12:18 PM   #14
Wickedclown
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

aight this battle was one sided as fuck.... no hate but this is my break down of how shit went down......

Young- Overall ya verse was kinda crappy (no hate), the opener... short first line and stretched 2nd line dont work (also rhyming you with you... u could do better than that)... punches and personals were weak, played lines. (win and again would work in audio not in text)... creativity was off. structure was off, wordplay was ok. overall homie, not ya best... 2/10

Elemental- structure was good, most of the bars were close to the same in length and thats always a pluss.... wordplay and creativity were there and some what good. punches and personals hit hard and thats what wins battles, overall ya had a pretty good verse, better than i expected.... 7/10

overall good battle to both, no hate young mix, just elevate and youl get there homie, takes time.....

VOTE- Elemental