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View Poll Results: Elemental Soul vs Young Mix
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Elemental Soul 5 100.00%
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Old 11-14-04, 05:51 PM   #1
Elemental Soul
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Elemental Soul vs Young Mix

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Old 11-14-04, 05:58 PM   #2
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Young Mix has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 05:58 PM.
 
Old 11-14-04, 06:02 PM   #3
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Old 11-14-04, 06:53 PM   #4
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Youngin plz,you wouldn't cross my mind if u was on a crucifix
Eva heard of dicks?thats right,twix aint da only thing in da mix
You must be gassed up like the jews,or when a car starts
Im not a girl,but my lyrical swords will literally break ya heart
Ya ass betta 'jet',my punches is hitten this wannabe hero
Ill put a halo on ya head,just to keep ya winnen streak at zero
Only way u'll be mix,is if i scratched and had ya face stung
No matter how old this idiot gets,his mind will stay young
This newbie wont last,fucken iced you like a snow sled,
Your not spider man,but you are another waste in the web
Bitch must be a commercial dickryda,producen club sounds Bury you alive,thats the only way ya rhymes is undaground
 
Old 11-14-04, 06:54 PM   #5
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Youngin plz,you wouldn't cross my mind if u was on a crucifix
Eva heard of dicks?thats right,twix aint da only thing in da mix
You must be gassed up like the jews,or when a car starts
Im not a girl,but my lyrical swords will literally break ya heart
Ya ass betta 'jet',my punches is hitten this wannabe hero
Ill put a halo on ya head,just to keep ya winnen streak at zero
Only way u'll be mix,is if i scratched and had ya face stung
No matter how old this idiot gets,his mind will stay young
This newbie wont last,fucken iced you like a snow sled,
Your not spider man,but you are another waste in the web
Bitch must be a commercial dickryda,producen club sounds
Bury you alive,thats the only way ya rhymes is undaground

my bad i messed up the structure b4 i fixed it on this post
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Old 11-15-04, 05:37 PM   #6
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My punchlinez'll melt you
Wit those rhymes, you couldn't touch me if Micheal Jackson helped you
You got everthing except you lack a win
cause my bars make ya think of ever tryna rap again
You know the thing dat really bugs me
His rhymes is garbage like he got em from Rumpke
Its time to teach dis bitch nigga a lesson
cause only reason people called you hot is because they saw you sweatin
If you don't go to church, ya betta cuz
cause I make you SWEAR TO GOD dat ya aint hot and ya neva was
Nigga, you da softest in da cattle
Goin against me,only thing you prove is ya wack and da loser of this battle//

Young Mix
 
Old 11-15-04, 09:31 PM   #7
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

iight iight young mix got some potentioel u needa work on ya wordplay more cuz ya shits not soundin right its not comin out how u want it im not sayin u needa explain ya shit i understand but da wordplayz weak

elemetal soul u got da wordplay punches hit connected about 75%/100% so datz a good thing and ya personalz weren't really there yet so work on that a little u got mad skill i was liken ya verse

overall verses

Young Mix. 55%/100%

Elemental Soul. 73%/100% ~$~ 1 ~$~
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Elizabeth on my thumb dude
Camden on my middle finger screamin fuck you
Rock ice in Trenton so dats da ring finger
You know I had to keep North Brunswick on da Trigga Finger
I Gotta hot bitch but i didint mean to play her
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Old 11-16-04, 03:16 PM   #8
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Old 11-16-04, 04:09 PM   #9
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Voted For: Elemental Soul



Alrite battle...have to go on elemantal soul on this....his punches were hittin harder den youngs....and his verse was structures bit more until the end....i also like the way ir flowed better than the other verse

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"Ya ass betta 'jet',my punches is hitten this wannabe hero
Ill put a halo on ya head,just to keep ya winnen streak at zero"

-Elemental Soul

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Old 11-16-04, 04:30 PM   #10
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

i think E.S. took this one by far, with better and harder punches...he also had a couple personals in there that i seen, but not that great...young mix came too simple for me, i wasnt feeling it...and yo lines were stretched...this was a one-sided battle...no more to say, but E.S. came harder

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Old 11-16-04, 09:45 PM   #11
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

elemental has all the skill in this battle why should mix be the winner
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Old 11-17-04, 04:35 PM   #12
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Yo dis Young
I read what yall said about me
talkin bout he came harder, his punches are harder,
mines was too simple, you liked his structure
But I aint gon hate on dat
I mean none of yall heard me, so yall wont know how
my linez are sequenced
I think if yall heard me, I would ve won,
thanx for da feedback

Young Mix
 
Old 11-17-04, 04:47 PM   #13
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This was feedback posted for Elemental Soul

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E.S had a decent opener, and sick ender.
Rest was blah.

Y.M didn't really have anything worth noting in his verse... although the Michael Jackson line was funny.

Punches- E.S
Diss Factor- E.S... but not a huge amount
Multies- fuck multies

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Old 11-18-04, 12:18 PM   #14
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

aight this battle was one sided as fuck.... no hate but this is my break down of how shit went down......

Young- Overall ya verse was kinda crappy (no hate), the opener... short first line and stretched 2nd line dont work (also rhyming you with you... u could do better than that)... punches and personals were weak, played lines. (win and again would work in audio not in text)... creativity was off. structure was off, wordplay was ok. overall homie, not ya best... 2/10

Elemental- structure was good, most of the bars were close to the same in length and thats always a pluss.... wordplay and creativity were there and some what good. punches and personals hit hard and thats what wins battles, overall ya had a pretty good verse, better than i expected.... 7/10

overall good battle to both, no hate young mix, just elevate and youl get there homie, takes time.....

VOTE- Elemental
 
 


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