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Old 11-18-04, 09:04 PM   #14
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D.M verse....

I’ll go through u like an chemical …………acid
Like ya rhymes there fake like ….surgery plastic
1st line i was feeling 2ed was ok...

Like an broken cd burner ya rhymes do not burned
Me killing u is over-rated so kid iam leavin u burnt
nah i wasnt feeling this....

Punches like broken dsl not fast and its not connectin
If I spit on audio I’ll will make u def I’ll Ear-rectdem
decent word-play...

Put an deadly needle on ya toungue still couldn’t spit sars
couldn’t deflate my chest if he punch through an chess board
decent..

U coming from da u.k change it to U.G underground cause yall neva be stated ( spoken about)
This time u bout to get mummified, put u in an world of hurt strap in bandages
ok but would of word it better to hit alot harder....

put 10 bricks in ya mouth still couldn’t spit harder punches nor if u did abdominal crunches
1st line good 2ed weak mang u could of followed up with something stronger then that....

Pictrue perfect I think ya lens is crooked and broken cause u cant spit images
I’ll ripp through ur esophagus so u wont be hunger for more, iam killing it

ending was preety good...

all around u had a couple of decent lines, 1 weak bar N 1 bar u should of re-word it better all around still a decent drop just need it harder punches...

7.0 outta 10....

next: P.perfect...

Your pussy lines remind me of sixty nine
Cuz…..
Not only do they blow, but fuckin suck at the same time
good opener nice punch...

This faggot virgin pushin that pink is cool… he won’t push me
Cuz….
joining a crew called (pink) is the closes your come to inside pussy
ha decent diss on the crew name...

this fuckin bitch talks to fuckin much, imma sew his mouth shut
then….
His butt shut so he’ll stop droppin his weak shit so much
nah i wasnt feeling this.....

Look at this pussies beef its shows he’s a weakling
(avy)…
so imma go ahead and just let my grandma flip it for me
nah WTF this was weak...

you have no chance;
start tearing your rhyme book… then continue it bitch
cuz that’s the….
only time usin your lyrics you be rippin up some shit
not a bad ending i felt what u was trying to say but u could of re-word it a little better...

yo, DM’z, you should change your name to Ferris wheel G
and maybe then…
in a battle you could actually `go a~round with me
decent ending...

all around u had 2 played bars but a couple of good punches ya creativeness was preety good, personal diss was decent all around tightbattle fellas N all around close one but....

i think picture prefect just edge it out with BETTER PUNCHES N was more creative.....

this aint no hate vote D.M i know how u probley feel and honestly this is a straight up vote far from hate N thats my word.....