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Old 11-19-04, 06:18 PM   #19
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Voted For: Carnage

decent battle but carnage outmatched u....... lyrical blact had sum ok lines, but it was sum pretty commercial shit and not as creative as carnage..... carnage had the way better vocab and creative, well thought out punches go to carnage.... Blast had some lil punches but nothin too creative or well though out..... juss sum basic shit.... carnages wen i read it out loud had a decent flow to it too.... Blast had pretty uneven bars in sum parts...... the only problem i had with Carnage was like 2 of his lines didnt exactly rhyme with their previous ones, but it was all good and close enough to puul out this battle.... Carnage work on ur actual rhymin and blast u should work on ur vocab and ur elementary punches....
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