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Middle Weight
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This was feedback posted for M-Dog
IP:
Elevation hasn't occured................since we last past mics,
Think's he's OMB attemptin multies but they don't work right,
^ GUD OPENER..STR8 PUNCH
18 battles and 12 times u experienced a "herb-bashing",
Ur vocabs like ur looks.........them "words ain't dashing",
^^DECENT..NICE WORDPLAY
This the season to be jolly...so why's ya mouth flapping?,
So u concealed ya presence...but u ain't...it's jus ur 'w'rapping,
^LOL..NICE WORDPLAY
Tell ya avy to calm down ya need to lose the combat stance,
Coz u destined to hit ya unlucky number like u fallback fast,
^^GUD PERSONAL
Ya abilities is small that's not why u have a micro-phone,
Coz the last time we went toe 2 toe...lil piggy run back home
^ HIT WIT THA PERSONAL AGAIN...
Ite man you beat me before thats "true-ta-say"
Ya gunna get "bruised today"....you need a new way
^^MULTI...NO PUNCH?
as youll get left in pieces like saddam n uday coz suxing as many
diks as possile only time youll be da top-head in "UK"!!!! (his profile says his top head in da uk)
^^GUD PUNCH...BUT IT DIDNT RHYME
Claiming your da king when youve "never-took-crowns"
When ya spittin bitch no one "ever- looks-round"
^^TOO BASIC
Ma verbal weather bound to have "shook-sound"
coz ima vet ready ta have this mad dog "put-down"
^^AGAIN A BASIC PUNCH
Peering wit ma optiks, I see this "seed is rotton"
his soft, better believe his "cotton" n he has no relation ta treassure
^^DIDNT RHYME...NO PUNCH
BLACK-YOUR punches were too basic, see u attempted multies and wordplay..n did aiight,but a lot of you rhymes didnt rhyme which threw off any flow...struc also was off.
u had one gud punch the "top head in the uk"..if that wudve rhymed n flowed beta it wud be a dope punch...elevate n try makin ya punches wittier/funnier.
mad dog...
to be honest u came kinda average by your standars...a solid consistent verse, that had everythin there, i know u didnt need to come ya hardest..but u took this wit ease
^^fuck cnt vote.lol.
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