Voted For: Tainted

i wonder do yall be really serious...

JOEY:yo lines were too simple, and stretched...and alot of em, u never completed ur barz...i think u need to work on alotta things b4 u enter ur next battle, mainly structure, because this is text, and people gotta read it correct, or they wont get that punch...i didnt really see any amazing punches in yo verse, and yo personals werent there either...this was a wack verse, but no hate...i just think u should work on creativitie, switch up yo style homie

tainted: u had a nice verse...wut really made me haf'to give u tha vote was yo rhyming patterns...i like how they werent predictable, and a lil creative...u also had some nice punches, but allota them were simple...yo structure was certainly better, so u dont gotta worry bout that. this was a good verse for tha person u battled, but if u battle someone more elevated than this, u might get merk'd(but no hate), just work on this positive and negative feedbac...yo personals were coo, but couldve been directed to any1...but all around a good verse, that gave u my vote

overall- i think yal should both focus on tha feedbac, and use it for yall next battle, yall both got skillz, but only 1 person could come out on top...tainted, because he had a better all around flow and structure...

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