yea u can terll its ur first attmept... sounds like ur readin this straight off the paper.. try and say ur verse alotta times over outloud so that u have it memorized.... that way u dont have to worry about the words and u can start to put in emotion.... yea and turn ur vocals UP..... I CANT HERE U..... and u kinda mumbled and whispered it. were u embarassed of wat u were sayin or was it really late???? u sounded ok but u needa def work on ur quality

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