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Old 11-21-04, 10:46 PM   #13
M&rk
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Voted For: Kwell

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160852
^^^yo homes return the votes. any....... heres how i saw it

limited yo talked about yourself too much, u aint throw in any wordplay. so this kwell kid wins wit these to wordplay punches which weren't bad at all.

n like bitches wit tied tubes, dawg u simply fail ta' deliver
^^^hot

no creativity, i can see that u Limited in terms of brain activity
^^^not bad, good name usage and lead in.
rest of your lines were alot of fillers but decent drop wit them to lines.


limited-
'Cause you in this battle, is like where you live...

...It's headin down south...
^^^decent attempt at a personal if he was from hmmm... DOWN SOUTH, but hes from cali, get your lines straight, if that was from somone from georgia it woulda been ite

anyway dont rush ya'll battles, hit hard each line, and return the vote wit some honest shit like im droppin here. link at top hit it up playa's
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