FuxJustAWord
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i agree wit saraan..... this shit is pretty dope.... real good beat for this type of song.... and the first guy (calam) really goes well with this beat (his voice) and his quality is real good..... pretty nice hook.... everythin in this song really works together... prolly the most well put together song........ woah.. WTF?!?!? Jin juss came on the track... lmao... calam all of a sudden sounded alil like tha mc to me..... this song is pretty dope.... 9.5/10
i gotta alil suggestion tho.... wen that hook comes in at the end (maybe only the second time) have her start singin the shit in the background and tryna hit some notes.... like they do in some commercial shit. like repeatin wat was juss sed in the hook a beat later
( i get the feelin im not explainin this shit well)
U gave all u had but it wasnt enough (U GAVE ALL u HAd)
I gave wat i had but it wasnt enough (I GAve it All)
I believed in u, but u proved me wrong (believed in U, but i was wrong)
Now there aint nothin left, so im movin on (Nothin, nothin left)
sum shit like that........ FUCK IT, im stupid anywyas
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