wow, this is a very good O.M., you came hott as usuall, i liked how u explained his life and why he had to end it, i think alot of ppl could relate to this. This is a well thought out verse as i could very easily tell by the emotion. The best line to me is....

But before you criticize, put yourself in my eyes, in my shoes...
Cause when somethin' is perfect...it's almost always too good be true...

that was a very smart bar...

much props..
9.1/10

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